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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2009 15:21:11 GMT -5
Yes I am writing my life story here. Only part of it though. It is for all the cats who want to hear it.
It was a cold night. My sister DarkKit was curled up shivering next to my mother. "Mother, DarkKit's ice cold!" I whimpered. "Great StarClan! We must take her to a medicine cat at once!" my mother yowled. "But Mama, WillowPelt trapped us here....There's no way out....!" I cried. "Little one, I found an exit while you and DarkKit were asleep. Follow me." My mother said. Then she picked up DarkKit and ran towards the West area of the freezing tunnels and i followed. When we got out of the tunnels we headed straight to ThunderClan camp. As soon as we got there, my mother froze. "Stay where you are LightKit! There are foxes here! Guard your sister, I'm going to see if BreezePelt is in his den!" My mother mewed as she led Me and DarkKit to an area shielded with Brambles. "Okay mama, I won't let you down!" I mewed quickly. Then my mother darted into camp. When my mother returned, she had brought BreezePelt, RedTail, RavenFeather, SwallowTail, ClawScar, NightHeart, HarePaw, WetPaw, SunPaw, RobinPaw, DawnFlower, YellowKit, Graykit, And BlackKit with her along with some herbs. " Mama, Why are so many cats with you?" I asked. "We are leaving the forest." My mother Replied.
Thats all I can tell you right now. I know, I am Half ThunderClan and half ShadowClan. My father was ThornStar of ShadowClan, and my mother was HopeStar of ThunderClan. I know mixed relationships are forbidden, but they loved each other. I will tell more of the story later.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2009 15:11:08 GMT -5
That's so cool! I have one too: Shrewkit stood outside the bramble-covered den, snow falling around him. Moonkit... he thought. His last littermate had been killed by Spark, and his mother was gone. All he had left was Cloud, a gentle, caring she-cat who had lost her kits to BloodClan's fierce claws. BloodClan had nearly destroyed OceanClan, and his life. But...someone familiar was calling the gray kit, creeping through the snow. His mother, Firestorm! "Firestorm! I'm over here!" he yowled. "Shrewkit! You're alive!" she meowed. She raced over to him, then stopped. "W-where's Moonkit?" Shrewkit lowered his head, grief flooding over him. "He's...dead." he mewed. "Moonkit? Gone? Really?" hissed Firestorm. Shrewkit looked away. BloodClan had taken everything from him, his Clan, his sister, his whole life. He would get back at them someday--either wipe out thier Clan or kill Spark and his deputy, Raven. But first he had to get back to his Clan.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 9, 2009 16:29:56 GMT -5
I've made a new story: Snow in the Dawn!!! A reddish-brown tom paced around in the moonlight outside a thick bramble den, waiting for his medicine cat to come out. Then, the sightless gray tom pushed himself out of the narrow entrance, his blue eyes unreadable. "Your kits are in there, Foxleap. Two toms and a she-cat." the medicine cat mewed. "Thank you, Jayfeather." purred Foxleap. He padded into the den, it's cold blackness washing over him. "Poppyfrost?" "Here. I was just thinking about names for them. How about we call the tortoiseshell Vinekit?" murmured Poppyfrost. "Perfect. The one gray one should be Willowkit, in honor of Sorreltail's mother, and the brown one should be Snailkit." meowed Foxleap. "Yes...of course." mewed Poppyfrost ******** Poppyfrost blinked open her eyes. Her kits were thrashing around and wailing, thier tiny pink mouths gaping wide. Poppyfrost took them to Jayfeather's den, and dropped them on a mossy nest inside. "Dovepaw? Where's Jayfeather?" "Out collecting mallow. What's happening with the kits?" answered Dovepaw. Suddenly, all the kits spoke in a deep, threatening voice: "The life of the Clans will shatter...only three cats can prevent it. Vine, Willow, and Snail. The Snow Leopard is coming...be prepared." Then, they stopped moving and fell into sleep. "A prophecy...about them?" murmured Dovepaw. "They can't have made it up." hissed Poppyfrost.
Chapter 1
Vinekit leaped into the air, and landed on top of her brother, Snailkit. "Hey! Get off me!" he yowled. "Sorry. I'm really excited!" purred Vinekit. "You should be. The Clan is short of warriors, and don't forget we're still at war with ShadowClan. They could attack at any moment." meowed her mother, Poppyfrost. The tall walls of the hollow reached into the sky, it's mossy sides pale. She sat down. Her apprentice ceremony was to happen any second now, and she nearly shrieked with joy when Lionstar stopped talking with Whitewing and climbed up the hollow, onto the Highledge. Willowkit stepped up beside her as Lionstar's voice rang through the hollow. "Let all the cats old enough to catch thier own prey join here below the Highledge for a Clan meeting!" Vinekit padded over with Willowkit and Snailkit and stopped at the bottom of Highledge. "Today," yowled Lionstar once every cat gathered, "I must do my favorite duty. It is time to make three of our kits apprentices." He leaped down and called Vinekit and her brothers over. "Until the day they become warriors, these kits will be known as Vinepaw, Willowpaw, and Snailpaw. I will be mentor to Vinepaw." Vinepaw shivered with excitement. It was an honor to be the Clan leader's apprentice. "Cinderheart," Lionstar announced. "You will be Snailpaw's mentor. I trust that you will pass on your courage and devotion to the Clan to Snailpaw." Cinderheart paused, looking unsure, then padded over to Snailpaw. "I will." she vowed. "Brackenfur. Willowpaw might be your last apprentice, so you should pass on all Graystripe taught you to this young cat." meowed Lionstar. Brackenfur calmly walked over to Willowpaw. The three new mentors touched noses with the apprentices. "Lionstar?" asked Vinepaw when the cats had finished congratulating she and the other two apprentices. "Can we go hunting now? Or practice fighting moves?" "I was going to take you out to the lake, then take you hunting. Do you like that?" meowed Lionstar, turning to his apprentice. The lake? thought Vinepaw. I wanted to see the border with WindClan! But she agreed, and they padded over to the thorn tunnel. They pushed through, the forest scents overwhelming Vinepaw. "Where exactly are we going?" asked Vinepaw. "It's a bit risky...but I've decided to patrol the ShadowClan border, and if that's fine, I'll pay a quick visit to RiverClan." mewed Lionstar. "RiverClan? Why?" asked Vinepaw. "Can't you tell? Pine down there, marsh there--RiverClan might be at war with ShadowClan, too!" hissed Lionstar. "Sorry! I couldn't see..." Vinepaw trailed off. The whole Clan knew that Lionstar was part of a prophecy, so of course he could see across the lake! He might have that kind of power, especially since he was a leader. As they reached the border, a horrible scent filled her nose. As far as she knew, this was ShadowClan scent, and they weren't that close to the border! "Lionstar..." "I know. Intruders! Vinepaw, go back to camp and get as much help as you can." hissed Lionstar. She couldn't leave him here with ShadowClan cats there! "No. I'm staying with you." she mewed. "Go!" yowled Lionstar, pushing her away. She staggered, then raced as fast as she could across the woodland, ignoring the prey scents that filled her nose. She finally leaped out of trees and raced down the slope, brambles tugging at her pelt. She slowed and padded slowly through the thorn tunnel, tired from running. She got into the camp and yowled, "ThunderClan! We're being attacked!" Her call echoed in the hollow, and Cloudtail thrust his head out of the new warriors' den, a huge bramble bush. "ShadowClan? Did they move the border?" he hissed. "I...don't know...Lionstar...sent me...get help..." panted Vinepaw. "I'm going. Brightheart, Toadpaw, Brackenfur, Willowpaw, Squirrelflight, Bloodpaw! We've got to stop ShadowClan!" The six cats raced over from the small fresh-kill pile. "Vinepaw," meowed Brightheart. "Lead us there. Now."
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2009 17:05:45 GMT -5
Cool! Carry on!~
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2009 16:05:42 GMT -5
Ok here's what I've wrote since I posted the prolouge and chapter 1. Chapter 2
The cats finally arrived at the site of the invasion, and stopped at some fresh ShadowClan scent marks far inside ThunderClan territory. There was no sign of Lionstar. I shouldn't have left him there. I should have stayed! thought Vinepaw. "A patrol was here recently. If we hurry, we might be able to catch them." mewed Cloudtail. Suddenly, a furious yowl echoed in the forest. "Lionstar!" hissed Vinepaw. She raced toward the sound, her paws throwing dust in the air. "Vinepaw, stop!" yowled Bloodpaw. Vinepaw stopped, horrified. Russetstar, ShadowClan's leader, was clawing Lionstar's fur while her deputy, Snowbird, and Snaketail and Scorchfang stood watching. Vinepaw's Clanmates pounded into the grassy clearing. "Attack!" yowled Brackenfur. The patrol charged into the ShadowClan cats, fur and blood flying everywhere. "Help!" hissed Willowpaw, her call muffled by Scorchfang's fur. Vinepaw knew she was useless without her warrior training, but she raced over and ran her claws across Scorchfang's fur. He yowled in pain and turned on her, knocking her into Russetstar. The tabby whipped around and tossed her across the clearing, and she slammed onto a thick pine tree. She slid down onto the forest floor, and the last thing she saw was Russetstar's gleaming eyes.
Chapter 3
Willowpaw raced over to Brackenfur, bristling in fear. "Vinepaw's hurt! Russetstar's over there, I think she wants to kill her!" "I'll handle it, but you help Bloodpaw. He can't fight Snowbird on his own." hissed Brackenfur. Willowpaw nodded and raced over to Bloodpaw. "A kit? Fighting ShadowClan?" hissed Snowbird. "I'm not a kit!" yowled Willowpaw. He stretched out his front legs, raking his claws across her nose. She leaped back, blood pouring from the scratch. "Retreat!" yowled Russetstar. She and her patrol raced away. "And don't come back!" yowled Bloodpaw. But Willowpaw's pride in defeating the patrol quickly dissolved at the sight of Vinepaw's limp body on the other side of the clearing. Brackenfur gently took her scruff in his jaws. Through the mouthfull of fur, he mewed "Let's go." Willowpaw raced forward to catch up with him as they set off through the forest. "Will she be alright?" she asked. "I'm not a medicine cat. I don't know. But she's not dead; that's for sure." Brackenfur added as Vinepaw shifted in his grip. "Let me down! I can walk by myself!" she yowled. "No." meowed Brackenfur. He ignored her until they crept into the thorn tunnel leading into the hollow. Jayfeather was below Highledge, sorting out the herbs he needed to treat the injured cats. Brackenfur trotted over to Jayfeather, and dropped Vinepaw beside him. "Vinepaw!" yowled Poppyfrost. She raced over and began pestering Jayfeather with questions. "Will she live? Did she break a bone? Will she still be a warrior apprentice?" Jayfeather ignored her and began searching Vinepaw's legs for any sign of injuries. He stopped at her left front leg, lifting it to reveal a large wound on her chest, red and bloody. "Vinepaw!" wailed Willowpaw. He raced to Vinepaw's side, trying to get past Jayfeather. "Go away!" hissed Jayfeather, pressing a clump of cobwebs on Vinepaw. "She's fine." "Stop that! It hurts!" hissed Vinepaw. "See?" mewed Jayfeather around a pile of marigold in his mouth. He spat the herb out, removing the cobwebs from Vinepaw and pressing the chewed flowers in its place. "Now leave! Help Dovepaw with treating the other cats; she can't do everything herself." Willowpaw slowly padded away. Dovepaw rushed past him, yowling "Jayfeather! Jayfeather!" Spinning around, Willowpaw heard Dovepaw meow, "It's Whitewing. She's....weird!" "What do you mean?" mewed Jayfeather, turning to Dovepaw. Blindness hadn't stopped the curiosity from burning in his blue eyes. "I don't know! She's weird!" wailed Dovepaw. Jayfeather narrowed his eyes and hissed "Stay here and help Vinepaw. Willowpaw, come with me." They padded to where Whitewing sat, crouched by the warriors' den. She moaned and hung her head, her blue eyes dull with grief. What's she sad about? She didn't even fight ShadowClan! thought Willowpaw. Then he realized: Birchfall hadn't come back with the patrol. "He's gone! I shouldn't have let him go without me!" she wailed to the darkening sky. "Whitewing, what's wrong?" mewed Jayfeather. "Birchfall! He's not here." Whitewing's voice lowered to a whisper. "He's gone." "Birchfall?" mumbled Jayfeather. "Great. ShadowClan have him." Looking around, he added, "Lionstar, too. Foxleap! Come to my den! There's something you need to know." The tabby tom was sitting next to Dovepaw, staring at Vinepaw. When Jayfeather called him he looked up, his amber eyes clouded with worry. He padded with Jayfeather to the medicine cat's den, staring at the ground. "Willowpaw!" Brackenfur was waiting impatiently at the other side of the clearing. "What?" Willowpaw mewed when he got to his mentor's side. "Come with me." Brackenfur meowed, flicking his tail. The cats padded out of the hollow, walking up the slope and into the forest.
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