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Post by roxie on Jan 28, 2008 20:20:08 GMT -5
One day Firefang went hunting and she suddenly saw a shadowy figure. She looked toward it and ignored it. She saw that it was getting dark so she had to go home. Another day later she went hunting again and about a half-an hour later she saw the shadowy figure andcalled, Who is there!!! the figure answered, I am IronFang and I see that you and I are from Windclan. Firefang replied, Yes i am from Windclan. They just stood there staring at eachother. Firefang was thinking, I think I am at the point of having a mate............................
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2008 22:32:42 GMT -5
ok your roleplaying sounded like it didn't just happen, it has to happen then and there example of your characters of me playing them as if they were my characters:
Firefang stood in a stalking position, eyeing her prey she pounced.She caught it by the foot and then killed it quickly with a bite in it's throat.Firefang picked it up and brung to her other prey she caught earlier.A movement caught her eye and she looked up, nothing was there but just the wind blowing in the light yellish brown grass.Firefang sniffed the air, no scent came to her so she kept gathering prey for her clan.It was almost time to leave when the dark figure came again, she loked up and called, Who is there?When she thought there was no reply she bent down scenting a trail of rabbit.I am IronFang and I see that you and I are from Windclan.A voice mewed as it stepped out from the dried grass.Yes I am from Windclan.She replied as she looked up gazing at a tom with Windlcan scent.They both stood there, staring at eachother.When Firefang thought, I think this is the right one, the one I've been longing for my whole life!I found him, my mate!
See it was right then and there!Not that it didn't just just happen but instead like a trillion years ago.
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