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Post by swiftpath on Jan 5, 2008 11:25:20 GMT -5
Ravenwhisker bounded over to the training hollow. Her muscles rippled with every step she took, hard and lean under her slim pelt. She only stopped when she reached the hollow to wait for the apprentices. I'm glad he's smart enough. Some toms never learned to control themselves the way he has today. Such love shone in their eyes.
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Post by Whitestar on Jan 5, 2008 11:37:00 GMT -5
Hawkpaw ran after Ravenwhisker into the training hollow. He reached it and sat down a small bit away from Ravenwhisker. He looked around the training hollow and saw that it looked the same as it always had. Sometimes he wished things wouldn't be so boring. He looked towards the way he came to see if Rainpaw was coming.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2008 22:15:02 GMT -5
Rainpaw ran through smelling some rabbits as she passed the spot where they had hid, she was there and waited for Ravenwhisker to give the order for what to do.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 5, 2008 23:05:52 GMT -5
Satisfied that they were both there, Ravenwhisker started to give instructions. Rainpaw, you will be first, do not sheath your claws, keep them extended as if I was a REAL enemy warrior. Do not worry about hurting me, now, Hit me with your BEST SHOT! Ravenwhisker dropped into a crouch watching Rainpaw for her movements, analyzing every twitch.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2008 23:23:47 GMT -5
Rainpaw stepped forward and then moved side to side remembering the moves she had saw Firestar do at the first gathering, tricking Ravenwhisker she ran forward and jumped landing on Ravenwhiskers tail, she spun around unsheathing her claws she grabbed on to her back and clawed it to death.Rainpaw bit Ravenwhisker's back leg and then jumped landing infront of Rainpaw she slashed her paw at Ravenwhisker hoping that she wouldn't miss.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 5, 2008 23:30:38 GMT -5
Momentarily caught off gaurd at Rainpaws attack, Ravenwhisker screeched in pain, She was good for a young apprentice. But Ravenwhisker saw her front leg twitch as Rainpaw prepared to strike her in the face, rearing up, Ravenwhisker neatly dogged the attack. Using Rainpaws own attack against her, Ravenwhisker dropped her sheathed paw to swat Rainpaws away, using Rainpaws own weight to spin her around so she landed heavily.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2008 23:46:27 GMT -5
Rainpaw held the yowl of pain in her throat and then a growl came instead of a yowl, she got up and stared at Ravenwhisker her fur bristling, she ran using an attack that Ravenwhisker probably didn't know, she ran toward her and then moved to the side and then pounced on Ravenwhisker.Digging her claws into Ravenwhiskers fur, she bit into the back and this time felt blood.She threw herself back feeling weird with the blood around her teeth.She had never felt it but still she went back into fighting.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 5, 2008 23:52:24 GMT -5
ok, I give! Ravenwhisker chuckled. VERY good job, I didn't see it coming. and you have to get used to that feeling, you canm't hesitate in battle.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2008 23:58:25 GMT -5
I know it's just that I never flet it before.Rainpaw went to sit next to Hakwpaw waiting for Ravenwhisker to tell him tofight her.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 6, 2008 0:01:22 GMT -5
Ravenwhisker took a moment to compose herself. Ok, Hawkpaw, attack me! Her rump swung from side to side preparing for his attack.
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Post by Whitestar on Jan 6, 2008 11:41:56 GMT -5
Hawkpaw had watched the two she-cats fight. He didn't know that they could fight so good. He heard that it was now his turn so he crouched down low. He quickly moved to one side and pounced on Ravenwhisker's back. He bit her on the scruff and shook his head from side to side, trying to draw blood.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 6, 2008 17:36:56 GMT -5
Hawkpaw hit the pressure point in Ravenwhiskers neck. She hissed and crouched, springing upwards and knocking him off her back. She stood in front of his face, ready for his next attack, they had to get back to camp soon, the gathering was going to start tonight.
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Post by swiftpath on Jan 6, 2008 17:41:38 GMT -5
((I'm going to skip ahead ur moves b/c we need to go to the gathering, I'll say that you did well though))
Ravenwhisker stood panting in front of the apprentices. You both did well! It's time for the gathering, and both of you are chosen! I will talk to Firestar about you becoming warriors. I'm so proud of you both! She bounded towards the camp to go to the gathering.
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